Rough draft on Active Minds
It's a pretty rough draft right now. I still have three interviews to conduct this week, which will be video recorded so it won't just be stills. My final product will be significantly different from what I have now, and I plan on focusing the video more on the Stand Against Silence event and vigil that just happened because it's relevant and timely. I know the pictures don't exactly flow with the audio right now, but the two times I interviewed the speaker, Kevin Cannon, I thought I was going to focus the video solely on what Active Minds does rather than this event. I also just realized I forgot to incorporate his name into the video, but it will be on the final draft.
What I need help with: Do you guys think I should incorporate more statistics at the beginning, or would more than those 3 be too much? Do you think the music/video in general is too melodramatic, and if so do you have any recommendations to tone that down?
Thanks!
-Laura
